Spring Break

“Ahhh…alone at last.

What a beautiful spring day.

The sun on my face, feet in the water.”


“This way everyone, this way…

Over here we have a lovely high-altitude salt water lake that may suit your needs.

Plenty of larva, small insects, algae, and shrimp for the most discerning palettes.

While it gets a little cold at night, it’s a wonderful place to raise a family.”


“Um, excuse me.”


“Oh, sorry, didn’t see you there.”


“No problem, but you see, I was looking for a nice quiet place to get a little rest and relaxation. A spring break if you will.”


“Are we bothering you?”


“Well, there are quite a lot of you.”


“A flamboyance of flamingos, I’m afraid.”


“Do you think you will be long?”


“Just a few months.”




“You could join us. We are about to start the dance.”


“Dancing? I love dancing!”


“Well then, let’s go.”



**Created for Spring Fling: A Writing Contest. This entry earned Third Place!


16 thoughts on “Spring Break”

  1. Haha love the voice of your character. The GUF was a great visual. Very funny. Good luck!


  2. 😆😆😆 this is hilarious!! I was smiling and laughing from the get go and it just got funnier and funnier. I love your humor.💓

    Thank you so much for this wonderful entry to the Spring Fling Writing Contest!


  3. Your humor is spot on in this piece, Rebecca! I’ll agree with everyone else – I was smiling and laughing throughout! “A flamboyance of flamingoes, I’m afraid” was my favorite line. Great job and good luck in the contest!


  4. Well done, Rebecca! The voice is so strong–I loved the poor little flamingo who just wanted to have a little alone time. This is such a funny piece. Good luck!!


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